Monday, October 26, 2009

Forever "Free Verse"

A promise has been made
With true feelings
Will stay together
with all meanings
I said goodbye
but not forever
I still have the hope
flowing like a river
You will be back
Here for me...
You will be back
Yes, you promised me
regardless of the goodbye
regardless of the travel
You will be back for me
Will stay together
Because I love you so much
I love you forever...


  1. Shadow, Thoughts and Margie...thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I love them!

  2. Thank you Indigo for your comment and welcome to Autumn leaves...I hope I'll see you here more often.

  3. Thanks Susie for your nice comment..please visit again...

  4. How come my friend.. I would promise I had left a comment in this post before..,. but something must have i done wrong... Anyway, I was just visiting to tell you THANK YOU so much for your always beautiful and sweet comments... it's always a pleasure to me seeing you come by.
    Now I must repeat how much I love this goodbye-hello poem. How much we have to suffer for the goodbyes, how much we long for the returns...
    Your writing is precious.
    Have a nice weekend and I hope you are fine and recovered by now.
    Sweet hugs xoxoxo

  5. I love this structure of short unfinished sentences - very sweet.


  6. Thank you Dulce for your sweet words and yes! I am getting better...thanks for your care


    Valerie...Thank you so much for passing by